Friday, June 14, 2013

Wine Mama (12) - Of Bears and Intruders

Kirk Carter@ WGA Copyright 2013


WINE MAMA (12)


OF BEARS AND INTRUDERS



two and a half hours later


EXT: FOREST ACROSS STREET FROM HUDSON VINEYARDS-1:30 A. M.

SHOWING  MAMA BLACK BEAR WITH CUBS WANDERING THROUGH WOODS

MAMA BEAR STOPPING, REARING UP ON TWO LEGS

CLOSE UP ON SNIFFING NOSE

CHANGES DIRECTION,  HEADING ACROSS STREET TOWARD SANDY'S FRESHLY PUT OUT TRASH BINS, CUBS FOLLOWING

AFTER SNIFFING OUT SEVERAL BINS, SHE FINDS ONE WITH THE FRESH LEFTOVERS, TIPS BIN OVER AND STARTS DIGGING THROUGH SPILLED GARBAGE, CUBS EAGERLY WAIT FOR SCRAPS

(scene switch)


PETER AND SAM'S POTATO CHIP TRUCK SHOWS UP DOWN THE STREET FROM THE HUDSON VINEYARD


INT: POTATO CHIP TRUCK


PETER

"Alright, we get this bitch...you hear me?"


SAM

"Well, we can't have any fun, if we ain't got the babe!"


PETER

"It's not just that, but that dude, ah Brian, might be over there, so if that happens we might just have to take 'em both down!"


SHOWING THEM PUTTING CLIPS INTO THEIR NINE-MILLIMETERS AND COCKING THEM BACK


SAM

"Let's just do this right the first time, I don't like fucking up!"


PETER

"Your just a fuck up anyway, try to get something right...okay?"


SAM

"I hear ya, come on, let's go...hope she's got some booze in there, man I need something!"



BOTH EXISTING TRUCK, START WALKING DOWN EDGE OF STREET

(scene switch)


AS THEY WALK UP, MAMA BEAR SENSES PETER AND SAM COMING TO THE ENTRANCE OF THE VINEYARD

MAMA BEAR AND CUBS RUN INTO ENTRANCE

MOTION DETECTOR GOES OFF, CALLING SANDY'S PHONE

BEAR'S RUNNING TO BACK OF PROPERTY AS ALARM BEEPS

(scene switch)


INT: APPLE PHONE CENTER

LOOKING AT TOP OF TECHNICIAN"S DESK SHOWING BRIAN'S PHONE COMING TO LIFE AS IT'S PLUGGED INTO CHARGER, SHOWING BEAR'S COMING INTO ENTRANCE

(scene switch)


INT: SANDY'S BEDROOM

SHE AWAKES, LOOKING AT VIDEO FEED AT A NOW BLANK ENTRANCE

SANDY

"Ah man, what's this shit, a false alarm, God I need to sleep!"


SANDY FALLING BACK TO SLEEP

(scene switch)


EXT: HUDSON VINEYARD-FRONT YARD


PETER AND SAM APPROACH ENTRANCE, SETTING OFF ALARM AGAIN

SANDY BOUNCES OUT OF BED, SEEING TWO INDIVIDUALS TIP-TOEING IN 

SHE GRABS SHOTGUN AND GOES TO FRONT DOOR, LOOKING OUT CURTAINS

HEARING PETER AND SAME CRACKING LEAVES AS THEY STEP TOWARD FRONT DOOR

SANDY "Huffs", DECIDES TO BE PROACTIVE AND CRACK DOOR, STICKING PART OF SHOTGUN THROUGH OPENING


SANDY

"I don't know who you fuckers are, but you better get your ass off my property now!"


SAM TAKES AT DOOR, BLOWING AWAY CENTER, WOOD FLYING, BARELY MISSING SANDY'S HEAD

SANDY RETURNS FIRE, HITTING SAM IN CENTER OF CHEST, KILLING HIM INSTANTLY

PETER TURNS AND STARTS RUNNING BACK UP PATHWAY

STARTLED MAMA BEAR AND CUBS START RUNNING BACK UP ENTRANCE, ALMOST RUNNING INTO PETER

SANDY UNLOADS ANOTHER SHELL, HITTING ONE OF THE CUBS

IT STARTS TO SQUEAL AND SHORTLY AFTER BLEEDS TO DEATH

ANGRY MAMA BEAR SPOTS PETER RUNNING BACK TO TRUCK

MAMA BEAR GOES INTO FULL ATTACK RUN

PETER HAS JUST ENTERED TRUCK, TRYING TO START IT

MAMA BEAR CLIMBS  INTO TRUCK, DRAGGING PETER OUT SHE PROCEEDS TO TEAR OPEN HIS CHEST CAVITY, EATING HIM ALIVE

SANDY OPENING DOOR, TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHERE THE HUMAN SCREAMS OF TERROR ARE COMING FROM, SHE STARTS TO WALK OUT INTO YARD, SEEING SAM LAYING DEAD, AND SPOTTING THE DEAD CUB

SANDY RUNS BACK INTO HOUSE AND CALLS NINE ONE-ONE


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Hello nine one-one, what's the nature of your call?"


SANDY

"Yes, oh God...I just shot a Bear and an intruder!"


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Okay mam, just calm down a sec...I have you located at 4320 Carpenter Road in Modesto, right?"


SANDY

"Yea, it's the Hudson Vineyards, this is Sandy Hudson...my motion detector went off and I told them not to come any closer, and they just kept coming...I just told them to just leave, but they didn't listen, I don't know what I did..."


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Okay, let me see if I have this correct, you told the Bear to leave, stay still, what mam?"


SANDY

"No, I don't know where the fucking Bear's came from...it was two people approaching my door...one took a shot at me, there was two of them did I say...I shot one of the guy's and then all these Bear's coming flying out down my driveway, and then I took another shot and accidentally shot one of the Bear's (crying)...it was just a baby!"


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Oh, that's not good, you can't just going around shooting Bear's like that!"


SANDY

"Well, what about the guy I shot?"


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Look mam, it's just an intruder, he entered your property, he's not what's important right now, but killing a Bear, especially a cub...well that's a very major offence in the State of California!"


SANDY

"But...but it was an accident, I didn't mean to do any of this, I Love animals..."


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Well, how many other intruder's and Bear's do you estimate they're were?"


SANDY

"Well I only saw one other intruder who was running off with the Bear's."


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Other Bear's, they were working together, like a gang of Bear's...just how many Bear's do you think you had out there?"


SANDY

"I don't know, it's dark out here, there might have been twenty for all I know, I couldn't tell you...just a dead baby Bear, that's all I know!"


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Okay mam, I've called the Sheriff's Department and Animal Control, just hold tight Miss Hudson, just hold tight, okay...don't touch anything!"


SANDY

"Okay, okay, I'll be alright I think, but what if they come back?"


NINE ONE-ONE OPERATOR

"Miss Hudson, stay calm...chill, help is on the way, okay?"


SANDY

"Thanks...thanks so much, bye!"


BOTH HANGING UP

SHOWING SANDY SHAKING AS SHE ATTEMPTS TO EXTRACT BRIAN'S TEMPORARY CELL PHONE NUMBER FROM HER PHONE MEMORY

FINDING IT, SHE DIALS IT, BRIAN ANSWERS


BRIAN

"Girl...what are you calling me up for, you know I'm tired, I'm trying to sleep here?"


SANDY

"Brian...there's been an accident, a bad accident...if you can, please come over here, now...I'm serious!


BRIAN SENSING SANDY'S TREMBLING


BRIAN

"Okay Sandy, just stay calm...let me get my shit together and I 'll be over as soon as I can..."


SANDY

"Thank you Brian...thank you so much!, bye!"



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